Hi there, i'm new here.

[Y2Jenn]

Hi! My names Jenn. A good budy of mine from college told me to come here and give this site a try. I'm desperately trying to improve and find it hard to do so sometimes. Maybe you guys can help me out. Anyway, this is Yuna from FFX. I'm sure you guys have heard of that game. :p Its my line work and a buddy of mine by the name of E.J. Su colored it. He's an amazing artist... he's been in a number of magazines.
Sorry about the link... I don't think I'm allowed to show pics directly from devart. *sigh*
Yuna colored (http://www.deviantart.com/view/660098)
And here's just the line work.
Yuna B+W (http://www.deviantart.com/view/251681)

[bOne]

nice interpretation of the original, there is not much to crit...

The movement of the clothes is well rendered.

There is just some problems with the hands which are a bit small...

well welcome to this forum

[mc_delroy]

hey

you did a tremendous job on the coloring....
i like it alot!

the only thing i could suggest is to give the drawing more action, and body movement... a book i suggest is
"how to draw marvel superheroes"
by far one of the best art references for charectar design i have come across

welcome to the boards

post more!

[MindCandyMan]

Great stuff...this is awesome. Really good.

[KeatonMarks]

Looks really good, but i think you buffed her up allitle to much. She lost her femeninity.

[Y2Jenn]

I buffed her up?! LOL :p Didn't realize that until someone said something! Meh, I had lots of troubles with this pic while I was drawing it. I'd put it away and everytime I came back to it, it would look worse. *sigh* Tell me I'm not the only one with this problem!
Thanks for the comments and crits guys! I'll post some more for ya to look at in a little while. :)

[TJ Verhagen]

very nice!

[Molin]

Hi...
Nice hair, but the face was to me a bit edgy.

Otherwise great, thx for sharing!.
/Molin | Media Artist | Studio77 (http://www.danielmolin.com)