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bellas
November 11th, 2003, 12:49 PM
well my last job
http://www.iespana.es/bellasart/dibujos/dama_bosque.jpg

deschamps
November 11th, 2003, 01:30 PM
I like the warmth of this piece. I think it would really help the piece if the head was worked out a little more. Because the hair is exactly the same hue as the background, it looks transparent. Also try not to paint hair as individual strands.

defcombeta
November 11th, 2003, 02:25 PM
i cant help but feel tht shes going to fall backwards looking at it more closely.

the colours are fantastic and it looks well , just the pose of balance

john mac

|SaRcAsM|
November 11th, 2003, 03:53 PM
Great work, i actually like the way the hair mixes with the background.......and i have to agree with defcombeta, her pose looks off. Maybe a problem with her ass\lowerback?

Peace!:chug:

Sarc

nardfrog
November 11th, 2003, 05:24 PM
i love the tree branches and overall color, the left hand is in a very unatural position though. I suggest making it look more relaxed