Hand me my weapon

[deschamps]

New Version:
http://www.ericdeschamps.com/ill/imgs/myweapon2.jpg

http://www.ericdeschamps.com/ill/imgs/myweapon_close.jpg


Old Version:
http://www.ericdeschamps.com/ill/imgs/myweapon.jpg

[tharmine]

Great job !

[I.was.ink]

Great work cire. Love that face.

Crits: His pose is too stiff. I think its the clothing that stiffens him up. Maybe if that robe wraps around his waist.

I get lost the further down we get to his legs and feet.

How is the weapon being handed to him, is someone doing it, with phsycic powers? I don't think we get the sense of someone giving him the weapon. Also, it looks more like a stick than a weapon, but then again, he could be deadly with a stick. :)

One other thing is the perspective of the floor. Looks off.

Hope I wasn't to direct here, just tryin to help you out man. Just doin my part with the constructive criting:)

-Iwasink-

[deschamps]

Thanks a bunch for the suggestions I.was.ink. I appreciate you giving it direct!
I made a few changes. Let me know what you think.

-Eric

[defcombeta]

love this it has such a strong sense of dignity about it, cant place it it just feels so strong as a image.

the face is fantastic and the pose is well balanced.

wow

:chug:

john mac

[Loga4]

Really nice work!

[endregan]

this rocks me. awesome job....

good imagination and idea;;!

[MrSmith]

wow. really nice, cire

[Crash]

Fucking great, the hand that hands over the "weapon" is awesome, the face is really really nice man.

Desktop worthy for sho :chug:

[Muttonhead]

Very nice work, Cire. You might think about making the characters' face a tad bit brighter so that there is no mistaking what the center of the composition is.... the cloth on his chest and torso competes just an ever-so-slight amount.

Take care.


-muttonhead