View Full Version : **Newbie**A Chun Li picture that I did...
Bond007
November 10th, 2003, 10:03 PM
Hi everyone. My girlfriend showed me this place and i've been lurking for a little while now. Some AMAZING stuff here. Just unbelievable. Anyway. Wanted to share one of my pics with all of you, get some feedback. Thanks...
Pencil sketch
http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid87/p71b1a0a44619ad28810ed3979e27571b/fa9726e3.jpg
Colored in Illustrator with another picture I did behind it
http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid87/p3c5928b014ffcf9560e4ebec6f2149f6/fa9726e1.jpg
:chug:
psyop63B
November 10th, 2003, 11:29 PM
I like both drawings, but I don't think they go together. In the second image the composition is uncomfortable. Chun-Li appears to be looking out at something, but there is no room on the right side of the composition. The BG drawing should also reflect the FG (almost like seeing the image and a detail inthe same composition). I think that would make the image much more powerful.
Very nice volume of work on your site, BTW. Hope this helps.
Rusty Red Robot
November 11th, 2003, 02:45 AM
psyop's got the crti down . . . just though I'd say I like your drawing. I especially enjoy the background image. You should post that by itself, as well!
LemoNHearT
November 11th, 2003, 05:19 AM
cool~very manga feel,i like the background image most~
LEvans
November 11th, 2003, 09:19 AM
psyop gave some good c&c... 'specially about the overall composition.... I agree in the final piece... the Chun Li in the forground would look better if she were offset to the left, since she is looking to the right....
But I really like the job you did on her eyes in the original sketch... and the detail on her stomach area in the illustrator piece is astounding.... that must have been a ton of layers... I would never have that much patience!
Bond007
November 12th, 2003, 04:04 PM
Originally posted by psyop63B
I like both drawings, but I don't think they go together. In the second image the composition is uncomfortable. Chun-Li appears to be looking out at something, but there is no room on the right side of the composition. The BG drawing should also reflect the FG (almost like seeing the image and a detail inthe same composition). I think that would make the image much more powerful.
Very nice volume of work on your site, BTW. Hope this helps.
Thanks for the input. It did help.:chug:
cycrincy
November 14th, 2003, 04:14 PM
i lik'em alot but the girl wit her arms up is a lil to masculin for me
vaporize
November 14th, 2003, 04:52 PM
i like your style. good work
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