When I'm sleepless...

[Jazz Brazil]

Hi,

first I should excuse for my very bad English, but I think it works.

So, I'm pretty shitty in drawing continously, couse my husband has a very bad hereditary-genetic illness, so I havn't a lot of time. This is my escape from the curse.
In night I hear nothing but the ticking clock, nobody who sreams or strike door, when I hear noises I cannot draw.
Some of my friends from The Huntington-Forum said, I should post something of that, what is coloured point in my time, allthough most of the time I draw with finest pencil, without colour.

So I hope You say: Go on.

Sunny greetings, Dorothée

[JBSketches]

Nice! I like your style a lot. Very individual. A couple of *slight* issues anatomically on a couple of them, but really nice work.

[New School]

Indeed, i agree with JB. Although you have great contrast on some, on others you need to push your dark values a little more(i have the same problem many times "] )

Also the i love the colored mouth, i would love to see some more of that style come out of you.

[Jazz Brazil]

Hi,
I thank you for your constructive critisism,
to nerves you - here is another one, and i made the outlines very thick. But I don´t wanna make a comic.

Sunny greetings
Dorothée

[Jasper Flick]

Nice stuff! Please go on! :)
Could you make the images a bit smaller though? They're hard to see this way because I need to scroll.

The outline doesn't make it a comic! It actually does a nice job focusing attention. He appears to be missing the back of his head though.

[Jazz Brazil]

Yes really, as if he had his head in a vise had. As the poor man, I must liberate him well.

It takes a lot of time, my husband needs my help at the moment, even when eating, I must be there. But I am trying.
Is a great environment here, even though I never will be as good and also haven´t the time, to construct such great figures . When I see other sketches, the characters have their own lives and turn and live in the imagination of the maker. Great!

Sunny greetings.
Dorothée