Short Film - "Dominos"

[SpeedDemon]

Rescently, I uploaded my newest short film made entirely by myself in Maya.
Check it out and tell me what you guys think.
http://ogig.blogspot.com/
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Thank you.

[BuNeLa]

Hmmm the animation of the looks fine except when it jumps from the cliff...you have given an anticipation that prepares people for a huge jump but instead it just drops down like i just disappeared. On all the other fronts...good work m8...

[egerie]

Ah that’s cute! The weight shifts are too few and a bit too stiff. Don’t hesitate to move your character’s feet around as we tend to do that constantly. Take yourself as a reference and you’ll notice :)
Nice facial expression on your protagonist there, but you could’ve pushed his emotion in his body language furthermore, even in a tight shot. The body’s your foundation and the face the confirmation, exaggeration or lie of what the character is feeling/expressing.
Can’t wait for the next!

[SpeedDemon]

thanks guys, i see what you are saying, great crits