Teeny-Bopper

['Fitz111']

Here's a concept sketch for a childrens publication illo I'm working on. Thought you might like to check it out.


http://www.bradfitzpatrick.com/images/misc/BF_alex_sketch_001.gif

[zeroe]

definitely a teeny bopper ^^
anyways some suggestions and crits:
i think you coul improve the whole thing composition wise, if youd move everything to the right 2 centimeters or two. Apart fromt aht, some different line weights would help give the picture more character, it looks a bit too flat like this. I also find her eyes kinda scary, maybe rounder eyes or smaller one swould work better?

anyway, good work. are we going to see this colored?

[Fozzybar]

i guess we will see this vectorized and colored...like always :D

I love your vector works, Fitz...