Night2 needs Help

[night2]

Hi there, My name is Amilton i'm 21, from Brazil and i study design.
I've been always wanting to be a illustator / concept artist but actualy i never enven worked on something ... usually i draw much just for love, i've been growing a litle lately but i'm still to noob... here are some of my draws but i will thank a lot for any tips critiques or anything else you want to say... im really open minded .. please feel free to tell anything !! thanks in advance

[Dilated]

I have to say I love your spawn

The zerg looks awfully flat, a reference would do it wonders and add some less saturated colours

In the tiki man painting the trees could use some more work, the green behind the trees looks like a solid wall, so add some objects in the distance.

Im no expert but I hope that helps, good start btw

[Eclair]

niice stuff.. big variety of stuff and i like it!

[Arbinn]

Good start! Keep 'em coming.

I like the tomato very much though it's a bit too smooth.

[night2]

Thanks guys for the suport ... i like to dra so many thing that i think i draw everything cause i love many things but that propbably why im not really good anything. Here are some more studies.

[night2]

some more

[Hauxe]

Oh my god the otter is so cute! I'd say the otter and the onion are your strongest works here so far. Spawn is cool as well.

Most of your artwork is suffering from flatness though. Remember you are drawing a 3d object on a 2d surface. I'd suggest drawing/ painting objects from life to get a better sense of volume. Just find some interesting objects around your house and have at it. Keep it up!

[kilon]

Well I see skill and ambitions. I would say you have the full potential in becoming a great artist. And you have very good foundation to base you studies. I see mistakes , here and there , but your work is very good. I would say go for with full throttle . :anime:

[night2]

Hey guys thanks for all comments, i know i make mistakes here and there, but also i paint so many diferent thing that i fell i litle confused sometimes.
I've allways wanted to be a concept artist but drawing so many diferent things whithout focus probably isn't a good path to follow.
Anyone have any tips about what i have to do !? .. what i need to study ... what type of portfolio i need to make or anyhting else ? Any help is extreme welcome !! thanks in advance ! (sorry about my poor english)

[redcylinder]

practise a lot and go your own way would be my tip, but Im no pro soo maybe Im wrong.

[kilon]

Hey guys thanks for all comments, i know i make mistakes here and there, but also i paint so many diferent thing that i fell i litle confused sometimes.
I've allways wanted to be a concept artist but drawing so many diferent things whithout focus probably isn't a good path to follow.
Anyone have any tips about what i have to do !? .. what i need to study ... what type of portfolio i need to make or anyhting else ? Any help is extreme welcome !! thanks in advance ! (sorry about my poor english)


I think that here applies the golden rule of life.

LEARN THINGS WITH STRUCTURE.

Our brain stores only the data that sees as useful, if it does not understand it or connect it with the available data it will discard it . So learning step by step will help you tremendously . Of course I am a noob at this but I will be surprised if the golden rule does not apply to art as well.

[night2]

something not so new but still of this year... first atempt of painting flowers

[Jasper Flick]

This is looking great!

Sweet flowers! I think they would jump out more if the green of the leaves and stalks wasn't so saturated.

The reflection of the otter isn't right. The head is too close to the surface, its food is gone, and it is seen from above, while it should've been seen from below (the virual viewer is below the surface, looking up at the otter).