The seamans sketchbook from beyond the sea.

[Seaman]

Hey.

Yeah and you guessed right, this is the seamans sketchbook. Thought it would be a good idea to start one to get some crits and advice from all of you (I really need it)

So lets start of with my latest WIP.
I know there is something really off with the perspective and angle but I just can't put my finger on it. Help?

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd34/KnifeSalesman/cowindi.jpg

Worked out the design at first.

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd34/KnifeSalesman/cowcon.jpg

And some WIPs and "oldies" (not really that old but I haven't work digital for that long)

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd34/KnifeSalesman/mnghf.jpg

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd34/KnifeSalesman/companionwhatcopy.jpg

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd34/KnifeSalesman/chap1.jpg

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd34/KnifeSalesman/negativ2copy.jpg

So all comments, crits and advice is welcome.

[Hauxe]

Wow- that pilot is straight out of Dr.Strangelove. I am really digging your style. The blocks are really cute. Just a small small pointer. The mouse-like creature from your chapter 1 illustration is seems just a little too similar to totoro (sp?) from studio ghibli. I'd just mix it up a bit more. And the man's portrait- his face just looks a little too flat. That's all. Great work though. Keep posting!

[Seaman]

Hah, actually.. I have never seen Dr. Strangelove (Don't beat me now)
Yeah, he kinda looks a lot like Totoro, but I will probably never get that skipole out of my ass to do any changes to it.
You're right about face, I will keep that in mind for next time.
Thanks!