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ornicar
October 22nd, 2002, 07:42 AM
http://www.blancfonce.com/ornicar/batpage01.jpg
Romus
October 22nd, 2002, 08:49 AM
Looks cool, i like hte last panel a lot
bOne
October 22nd, 2002, 10:53 AM
It seems to be the batman day :))) is it halloween ?

Well nice mood and nice texture !

I have few things to say about the narration. The fact that you repeat twice the poses of batman and catwoman seems to "freeze" the action than accelerate it. These characters are very dynamic and use very strange positions, I think you can use it to "deform" them, it could be less static.

But if you wanted to make a "john whoo" instant with catwoman it works perfectly, but not with batman...
bOne
October 22nd, 2002, 10:55 AM
hé j'avais pas vu que tu étais parisien je me serais pas pris la tête en anglais :))
TJ Verhagen
October 22nd, 2002, 01:07 PM
hey cool! looking bad ass!
Lono
October 22nd, 2002, 05:51 PM
this place is getting batty!

its totally crazy with bat man!

im into it.

nice work!

:evilbat:

-Lono
ornicar
October 23rd, 2002, 04:42 AM
thx... thx for your crits & comments!
actually, the first panel was meant to be a batman speed painting pic... and panel after panel, it's become a 'speed comics'! there's no scenario, it goes from nothing and to nowhere... but it is so funny to do
:p
ornicar
October 23rd, 2002, 11:17 AM
bOne >> c'est cool de trouver un compatriote sur un forum US :chug:
merci pour tes conseils de narration, comme je l'explique au dessus c'est parti d'un speed painting et la répétition de cases fait partie du trip speed... en fait quand j'y pense ça n'a même aucune prétention narrative:p
j'ai fais un tour sur ton site... mon dieu, mes mirettes ne s'en remettent toujours pas. la grande classe, bravo.

B²