I don't know what to do........!!

[tatao]

I feel strange......hauhau!
Something bothers me in this art and I do not know what is! please help me! thanks!!

http://www.morphinemedia.com/senac/ryf-m.jpg

[Fozzybar]

The drawing itself is ok, it's the background!

This yellow area doesn't match to the rest. How about drawing a rough shadow on the ground...and the ground itself...

And if there is a thing, you don't like in the girls drawing: Just delete this little curve on her right cheek (left for the viewer). Currently it looks like she's got something in her mouth...

[tatao]

http://www.tataoart.hpg.ig.com.br/galeria/maite%202.jpg

I think my art become much better now!
thanks Fozzybar!
I didn't understand all about the background yet! but I'll do some sketchs..... er... were you talking about draw some trees.... or rocks or sky??

[Fozzybar]

I don't know, what for you want to use it. So a sky isn't be necessary, if the whole image shouldn't be a complete illustration. Actually i meant just a plain ground covered with sand and/or grass.

But the main thing would be the shadow. I wanna see it...:clapping1