View Full Version : NEW NEMBER:please give me some advice,THX
fishwalker
November 3rd, 2003, 10:19 PM
http://www.fantasy-studio.com/non-cgi/usr/3/3_1723.jpg
http://www.fantasy-studio.com/non-cgi/usr/3/3_1723_1.jpg
http://www.fantasy-studio.com/non-cgi/usr/3/3_1723_2.jpg
fishwalker
November 3rd, 2003, 10:20 PM
http://www.fantasy-studio.com/non-cgi/usr/3/3_1723_3.jpg
http://www.fantasy-studio.com/non-cgi/usr/3/3_1723_4.jpg
mtw
November 3rd, 2003, 10:43 PM
Those are pretty. The anatomy is a little off in the first and last paintings.
mushuhaha
November 3rd, 2003, 11:12 PM
hihi, these are wonderful. My favs are the green lady and the juggler. I think you should tighten your work abit more. They are too loose and lack great details in many places. Some people could get away with looseness and still produce amazing stuff(hehe, like sparth and bengal). but in your case, the lack of details take away from the pieces. like the archer. his blue cloth pretty much failed to be pulled together, and the juggler's hands, which are not even in the correct shape. You put a lot of details in the face, then the rest of the body just gets too sketchy. The green lady is alot more successive, you just need to make the edges sharper, increase the saturation of the color a bit and have a higher contrast in lighting. if you keep that up, your work will be awesome.
fishwalker
November 3rd, 2003, 11:48 PM
Thank you for your suggestions , what you spoke has very heavy help to me. But I am unable to say more because of my terrible English. I will continue making great efforts afterwards, thank you again.
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