my first...

[Chicka]

Hey guys! I'm new here and this is the first drawing I post so go easy on me :s
No, just tell me what you think. I'm sorry about the smudge across the hair .. I don't know what happened.. I must have spilled something on it. But the drawing is just pencil and paper.. ok-cheers!


http://im1.shutterfly.com/procserv/47b3cf22b3127cce810e02a7971d0000000610

[nikia]

This is very good. Waiting for the rain to stop? I think her upper body could be a bit thicker compared to her arm and head. Also I think her ear is down and back a bit to far. Otherwise It's a great picture. I especially like the detail of the moisture on the window.

[Chicka]

thanx :) I drew it from a photo and wondered myself about the ear and upper body .. it looks weird, I know.. but it was like that on the photo... there was no rain on the photo though. I added it to make it look a bit more like she had a reason to sit there and stare out the window.

[talmir]

Very nice.. All I can say is that you might need to define the shadows more.. Currently it has a washed out feel to it.

But otherwice I like this piece. :)

p.s. I love the smile on the teddy she's holding.

[Chicka]

yeah it's been in my sketchbook for over a year now and most of it was starting to rub away so I took it out. Thanx talmir!