Samus

[Nephthys]

here is a pic i did of the video game character.
http://www.oneartiststudio.50g.com/gallery/samus-colored.jpg

[neble]

hey bud.

Nice concept, it's a really good start.

I noticed though that the lower legs seem a little too large for her frame, and almost a mans stance. She should have a little smaller feet and arch her bach a bit more. The way her back arm is creased seems a little funny. Try pulling her arm a little more towards her waist.

Otherwise the colors and the shading look great. Keep on going.

[battlemonkey]

i think everything looks pretty good execpt the gun arm. if i didnt know who samus was, i would look at this and think, " is she holding a tiny shield?" fix the gun and it'll help the piece alot. maybe swith the arm position? its unatural/almost impossible to be pointing a gun 100% accurately at the viewer. your coloring style looks a little flat.

[Crash]

Did you trace it?

[Nephthys]

neble:thanks and i will consider yout suggestions.
battlemonkey :thanks and yes the perspective on the gun/arm is off.

Crash:no,i never trace anything i draw,here is the original pic.

as you can see,i went and added the rest of her foot when i did the coloring.http://www.oneartiststudio.50g.com/gallery/samus1.jpg