more skecthy concept stuff

[BlackRose]

for some reason ive been in a protrait drawing craze the past couple of days and here's a clown sketch (ignore the cheap background)

story behind it:
postwar life in the ruins of once large and crowded cities is being overturned by road gangs. this is a young man part of a gang who call themselves the Freaks.

yes i know its a bad spinoff of akira but oh well. i plan to make about 8 differnt gangs, some good, some bad. also gonna do vehicles: motorcylcles, cars (more like dune buggies/ sand rails), 1-2 man helichopters ect.

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid87/p3589d397db5ccbaa6e09868de488cea1/faa8d2b2.jpg

[BlackRose]

no comments?
:confused:

[battlemonkey]

the ears are too large. the bottom is understandable, but the top of the ears shouldnt be so high up and fat.
looks almost like a girl? and the eye on the left is cock eyed.

[BlackRose]

thnx a lot for the crits:D

ears would be a quick fix. i think its the lips that give the feminen feel to him. i'll try to make them more masculine. i was trying for that look from the movie "the crow"

[battlemonkey]

if your going for the 'crow' look. you gotta change the colors. even if theyre a clown type of gang. they can still have darker colors n stuff. the neon just makes em look like clowns and not much else.

[BlackRose]

i meant for the lips... u know how in the movie he has a line extending froim the corner of his mouth.... sorry for being unclear