first time perspective

[farmer]

hi guys...

im new here..

i am drawing since 4 months...

finally i finished my first perspective painting..

it would be cool to get some crits of you guys..
http://sv1.3dbuzz.com/vbforum/onlc_attachment.php?s=&postid=413799

[Tully]

Your perspective looks pretty much perfect, farmer. My only real crit would be to darken the left of the cabinet. It's a little confusing having it be so light there.

Otherwise, great work. It suggests a pretty grusome scene

[mos667]

Wow, that looks pretty impressive. Really love the way you simplified everything, but it suggests (like the above post) something awful ;).

Something that may need a little work would be the shadows. They seem pretty...odd and maybe in the wrong angles and such.

mos.

EDIT: it actually may just be me, after I looked at it a second time.

[farmer]

the light above the desk is the only lightsource
but this light is reflecting everywhere..
(specially on the desk)
youre right... the shadows are not perfect...

i will work on it...

thx for crits..

[LightBrownboy]

Nice work, great perspective considering the amount of time you've been at it. A couple things that stuck out to me. Take another look at the cabinet, the thickness of the cabinet itself feels relatively thin for the drawers sticking out from them.

Also, the shadows, remember we get hard cast shadows the closer an object is to the light source, as we move farther away from the light source, the shadows get more diffused.
Meaning the shadows far away from the light , the edges
should be softened up. IN photoshop use the smudge tool on teh edges of the shadow like the ones on the far walls on the right of the image.

Hope this helps.

-LBB

[Red_Rook]

Reminds me of the E3 Doom 3 video. Heh, Good job thats impressive for four months. =)

[farmer]

thx for crits&tips..
i will try to make it better next time...
as is said it was my first perspective drawing ever...

do you guys know some helpful tutorials for perspective?

[Ian Mack]

The door on the right seems to be sliding a little.

as for tuts, I don't know of any online but I'll try to scan in some of th stuff I've gotten from school.