something im working on(CHANGED)

[Shaggy__311]

http://www.atwellart.com/animastyleeshags.jpg
something im working on
what u think
im not real good at doing ppl

[skullskip]

first off, you need to do some serious life study. your anatomy is so far from off itsnt damn near abstract. also try being more committed to your lines. you have several areas that have become incredibly muddy because of the large amount of double lines. you also need to work on your shading. try first just trying to create volume in the character. then work up to creating texture in the objects. there is also some trouble in your depth of field. the katanas look as if they are going into the guy as opposed to behind him. value changes could maybe fix this.

[Fozzybar]

Hmmm...skullskip, i don't know if this was meant to be a real life drawing...

I guess it should look a little cartoony...correct me Shaggy, if i am wrong...as a caricature i think, it's nice.

The thing about the swords is right...first i thought they should be stucked in his body...he looks like a cook, and this stucked knives made sense to me - like making meal of the cook himself, but after reading skullskip's comment, i realized, that this wasn't meant to be :)...bummer...

[juice]

this is a great concept.
work your way on consistance...
define the muscular structure a bit more,
keep your focus in masses and shadows.

you're on the good way amigo
i like it
but bring more physical drama next time

bravo.

juice.:D

[JoshuaTheJames]

Originally posted by skullskip
first off, you need to do some serious life study. your anatomy is so far from off itsnt damn near abstract. also try being more committed to your lines. you have several areas that have become incredibly muddy because of the large amount of double lines. you also need to work on your shading. try first just trying to create volume in the character. then work up to creating texture in the objects. there is also some trouble in your depth of field. the katanas look as if they are going into the guy as opposed to behind him. value changes could maybe fix this.
"why!!!" GOD DAMN boy!! thats f#%ked up! lol

though i do agree!!! WE ALL need "some serious life study!"

[Shaggy__311]

yes i need more life study, I plan on doing alot on my trip.
and it is not suppose to be life like
i do agree that the dept is not working on this pic im not use to drawing this kinda stuff. but i do enjoy it.

thanx for the input.