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Bergulf
August 2nd, 2008, 01:00 PM
Hi everyone. First post from me. Critique away.
Sir_E_Pent
August 2nd, 2008, 01:04 PM
First, I like your mask. Now, it does not fit with the rest of the picture. It looks like it was digitally applied after the fact. if you know what I mean. I would like to tell you how to soften it but I am not sure. She does look like someone I could party with.
Bergulf
August 3rd, 2008, 04:19 AM
Thanks for the critique Speedy.
I see what you mean about the mask not fitting in with the rest. I experimented with some different approaches to digital painting. The face is probably the least successfully rendered detail.
Max Challie
August 3rd, 2008, 07:06 AM
A darker background would add more drama.
If you're looking more for critique, I recommend a visit to the Critique Center.
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