"Scfi Ghouls" updated Nov4th

[Kidchuckle]

I guess this is my first post here..
its kind of combining Halloween theme + Pulp comics.
(its a mock cover.. in dedication to those old scfi comics).

http://www3.sympatico.ca/kidchuckle/Hallow_03_A.jpg

[bwkeough]

the characters, linework, and colors are all very good. I think that the values on the color layer might be a little too close together, tho. Try hiding the line layer and see if the space still holds or if it collapses. I would suggest making the far distance lighter and bluer.

[Kidchuckle]

I'll try that... I think initally I steered away from it, because when I was blocking in the colours the characters were a bit more cooler.. but now with the whole thing finished its changed a lot since I started. I'll try it out.

thanks.. I'll post up the change and see which everyone likes better

[Kidchuckle]

Another Slight Change right now ...
going to try something else as well
http://www3.sympatico.ca/kidchuckle/Hallow_03_B.jpg

[Kidchuckle]

heres another variation...
I may do a colour line version depending if I can resolve the issues that I have now.http://www3.sympatico.ca/kidchuckle/Hallow_03_C.jpg

[Kidchuckle]

One other iteration.. hopefully this might help the seperation a bit between the two characters.

http://www3.sympatico.ca/kidchuckle/Hallow_03_D.jpg

http://www3.sympatico.ca/kidchuckle/Hallow_03_E.jpg