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animafantasy
October 29th, 2003, 08:19 PM
Below pic is revised corps.
It has been a great help from Tully and other people¡¯s advises and critics.
I did more reviews on some of the mistakes that I¡¯ve been aware of, and here I am including pictures that I modified accordingly.


http://animafantasy.com/bbs/data/Stuff/corps_10301_sign600.JPG


http://animafantasy.com/bbs/data/Stuff/Stare_small2.jpg

defcombeta
October 29th, 2003, 08:42 PM
very adam and eve the last one, looks nice, although the snake is a bit odd , i know you are doing the curve towards the camera but it looks out of perspective a bit, i might be wrong. , i love the eagle it helps give the sky some life and adds the freedom to the atmosphere of the piece.

John mac

animafantasy
October 30th, 2003, 10:23 AM
Thanks John.
Your comment and critic gave me a much appreciation for it.

:chug:

pogonip
October 30th, 2003, 12:02 PM
They are both pretty good but the last one is looking really good keep painting and you'll soon be as good as Sparth and other great painters !!

Tully
October 30th, 2003, 03:16 PM
Looking great, animafantasy! I really like your addition of the mountains and the bird up there. It works much better now, imo :)

I love the 2nd one, the snake and the woman's skin tones in particular. Definitely a lot of tension there.

Keep up the good work!

animafantasy
October 30th, 2003, 06:36 PM
I post here again front hunter dog Doberman's detail.
http://animafantasy.com/bbs/data/Stuff/corps_noframe_detail2.JPG