Trying to get better- my sketchbook

[M-LAN]

im sorry, i took down my stuff, i need to get better on my own without negative critiscm

[Etcheberri]

Hi, i am not a pro at all,
but here is what i can say for what i know and see :)

(number your drawings it s easier to comment so)

piece 1 :
Well, i think there is a perspective issue, all your horizontal should converge to the same point.

i like the overall design.

piece 2 and 3 :
Atmospheric perspective should be stronger.

piece 4 :
i like the design, i think there is some anatomic issues, especially with her left leg.

For all the characters in genereal, there are really nice ideas in there, like it, i think the anatomy has some minor problem to fix but i cannot help a lot in this cos i am still learning all this too.

anyway, good job, keep it up,
do you work your basics in a sketchbook? like perspective and anatomy things?

[M-LAN]

more old

[M-LAN]

more stuff

[Michael Wasik]

the samurai jumping is awesome, great idea, great work.

[M-LAN]

some life drawings, mostly 10- 20 minutes

[M-LAN]

more old stuff, practicing from game screenshot refs of ninja gaiden and devil may cry, very old paintings

[iambanana]

What the...
You took down your stuff because of negative critisicm? Are you fucking kidding me? Now that's what I call taking the easy way out. And what negative criticism?

Don't be immature. Upload your stuff again and get back on the horse. We all have our bad days.

[FourTonMantis]

You got 3 replies...none of which had anything negative in them. Rather ironic you titled your sketchbook "Trying to get better". That sure is not the way to do it.

[SkyTheArtist]

You need to get criticism to improve! People need to tell you what you're doing right, and what you're doing wrong. I can't believe that you'd disrespect those who took the time to stop by and comment, just because it wasn't sugar-coated.

Better get some tougher skin, that's all I can say...