Feng-inspired tower/castle

[Adrian]

The early lord-of-the-rings-tower-design http://69.44.60.9/artbyfeng.com/sets/set_22.jpg by me great idol Feng Zhu inspired me to draw this:
http://www.storedyret.com/iB_html/uploads/post-17-43659-tower2.jpg

It is not modified at all after that i scanned it. (with my digital camera :D )
What do you think? Should I change anything?

[Genesis]

Ok, I'll tell you straight forward what I think.
It seems to be too flat, and too dark, you need to have obvious lightning/shadows in your image. I know that you seem to have shadows in it, but they are over done with the lack of difference between black and white, it is just black.. maybe try to work with that?

[Adrian]

OK, the only difference between the drawing and the digital version is that the digital is much more dark. Ex.: the road is almost white on the drawing.

[mroq]

in my opinion it is weird and curved but i like it. I'm not looking on the technical aspects of this drawing. I like just the idea of this castle. especially the flat elements standing near 3d ones. this makes the picture a sense of irreality, maybe some surrealism.

[Luke Mrozek]

Yeah, its a bit dark, but still i like it very much, it has its own mood and style.

Luke.