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timo.
July 22nd, 2008, 06:21 PM
Here's my newest painting that wa made in Photoshop CS2 and Painter X.
Approx~ 3 days.
Thanks for viewing :)

Titan
July 22nd, 2008, 06:23 PM
ohhh pretty..I like the sketchy touch to it.. well done:)

Elwell
July 22nd, 2008, 06:51 PM
There's some nice things going on here, but they're not holding together. You need to work on establishing and separating your different planes, and how they relate to the overall lighting scheme. The sky especially needs work.

Duman
July 22nd, 2008, 09:40 PM
I think its looking pretty nice, has some nice contrasting colors. I would spend some more time on the clouds, though. Bring them up to the same level of detail the rest of the piece has.

stalsby
July 22nd, 2008, 09:49 PM
Nice painting! I agree with Elwell on the establishing of planes better. Where the land meets the water could be integrated a little better, maybe some individual rocks and things sticking out of the water. Try to make it look like you can see the land beneath the water a little better. Other than that, really nice vivid colors!! Keep pushing!

Madfishmonger
July 22nd, 2008, 11:48 PM
I like this, I like how the hulking wreck sort of looks like a man, but like Elwell says, it needs something to hold it together.

takmask2
July 23rd, 2008, 01:33 AM
Wow, you painted mud correctly. Bravo. :)

Great, cold...creepy atmosphere!

IanE
July 23rd, 2008, 02:39 AM
There's some nice things going on here, but they're not holding together. You need to work on establishing and separating your different planes, and how they relate to the overall lighting scheme. The sky especially needs work.

Elwell, as always, is 100% correct. I'll toss in this addition: If you're going to do a really great job rendering the water at the bottom left (which you did, it's very nice) why not give the same treatment to the falling water and not settle for the squigly lines? Render it out, give it that treatment you gave to the rocks and so on, then take that same process to the sky and planes, and you shall know instant satisfaction and enlightenment!

showkunz
July 25th, 2008, 03:49 AM
Nice work.I like your color.

archipelago
July 25th, 2008, 05:02 AM
sexellent

beren120
July 25th, 2008, 06:13 AM
The foreground is really nice.

Nickodemus
July 25th, 2008, 09:07 AM
This is great, colors are are fantastic. My criticisms would be to add some atmosphere to the piece, and to add a person or an object to give a sense of scale to your audience. Love it!

sourgasm
July 25th, 2008, 12:09 PM
Tristan pretty much said exactly what I was thinking. This looks kind of like a photo montage of several different paintings.

There are definitely some impressive things going on, though. The waterfall especially.