Fenfir's sketchs

[Verisusi Fenfir]

Nearly all of my works are done with black ball-point pen. I try to practise every time I have.
Feel free to comment, I want to learn what I can, but still, I hope you'r genttle.


http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b129/Sarvihaara/yvanna_by_verisusi_fenfir.png
To my friend, here's her character in one rpg.

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b129/Sarvihaara/kodou_by_verisusifenfir-1.png
One of my own creatures.

[phoenicorn]

wow nice. this stuff is excelent. and with pen too. only suggestion I could recomend is to add a bit mor contrast to the first and third one but I am not sure if that will ruin it. the second one is near perfect ( I say near as some one will probably pull me up on some minute error that I cant spot. keep posting because I want to see more. As a note I will be subscribing to this thread. keep it up. later

[johanflod]

good start keep on posting !

you could play around more with where you want the focus to be in the painting. make the dragons head clearly defined and the body more like a siluette . Just some ideas from me :)

[Verisusi Fenfir]

phoenicorn, thank you very much about encouraging. And yes, if I would add more contrast to the first one, it would gett too dark on some places in dragons body.

Here comes more before my holidays, both done whit black ball-point pen.
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b129/Sarvihaara/engelhurja_by_verisusifenfir.png

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b129/Sarvihaara/zardie_by_verisusifenfir.png