Terrorist....

[Bl@stzone]

ok this is my first real post bar the one i put into the DSG the other day but do not i repeat DO NOT be kind iv only had my tablet for about a week so u know and i just for some reason felt like doing a terrorist typa guy ill do a swat uy to go with it as a pair later neway heres the pic

http://members.lycos.co.uk/blastzone03/terrorist copy.jpg

tell me what u think and any suggestions u go gimmie al u got guys

[Tully]

I think you'd do well to sketch the entire person before colouring it further. It's easier to decide what you want to do and makes sure there aren't gross anatomy problems before you start.

The mouth looks kinda creepy... are those his lips? teeth?
The eyes are uneven and the left one seems to be drooping down.
You wouldn't see any sort of outline of his nose, just the highlight there it makes the fabric protrude.
The mouth looks just a tad too high up.

Good luck

[Bl@stzone]

thanx for the comment man :PD good to see i got a reply so quick :D i see that you mean about the eye i think i spent so long on it i couldrent realy see what was wrong with it any more ill ketch out a bit more and update it soon in the mean time anyone who wants to give it a bit of a dig go ahead im open to any suggestion you might have....

[Bl@stzone]

ok this is what i got for now im not sure what im gonna do about the background in the mean time what can u give me about this image dont feel like ur being harsh i know im not very good and even if u think im better than you but you think you have a suggestion give me it im here to improve so do your worst muahahahah lol fire away

oh and i know about the mouth i havent really worked on that....

http://members.lycos.co.uk/blastzone03/terroristwip.jpg

thanx

[EVIL]

Why did you called this terrorist? he doesnt really look like a terroroist exept when you get all your terrorist info from counterstrike and the likes.

[Bl@stzone]

because hes based on the wall paintings ijhn ireland of the IRA who unless i am miuch mistaken given that they did bomb my local pub are terrorists....