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Noire
July 16th, 2008, 11:06 PM
I have left.
chuck18mp
July 16th, 2008, 11:39 PM
cool! but you have to post with the attachment thing lol!!! :)
Té-Can
July 17th, 2008, 12:00 AM
Looks beautiful, I adore the colors. You should submit all your drawings here even if you think they're bad that way we can help you improve.
eminkey2003
July 17th, 2008, 08:45 PM
Nice depth in the orange on the far right, but not so much in the one on the far left. The highlighted edge around it flattens it a bit, so that in only looks 3D in the center. I don't think you would actually see that in real life.
xinranliu
July 17th, 2008, 10:11 PM
definitively great rendering of the glass and choice of colors
also taking a picture of that painting would be better than scanning it in 4 parts
jedininjaman
July 19th, 2008, 11:48 PM
I love the colored inks, what did you use to color them?
Its very charming also nice use of traditional mediums
Post more! ! nice colors in all of these what else have you got?
keep it up man and stop by sometime
-jedi
blenditall
July 20th, 2008, 12:14 AM
Nice still life. The wine bottle seems to be pretty well done, and I like the cloth as well. I'm very curious about how this whole scene looked in real life -- not just to compare, but to see how you interpreted it. Too bad you didn't take a picture (or did you?).
DefiledVisions
July 21st, 2008, 06:29 PM
Hey there! nice sketchbook. I like the still life paintings the most, they're neat.
I also like the first pictuers, with curly frame, and colour. Nice.
Keep it up, love to see some more!
RandAlThor
July 25th, 2008, 08:20 AM
Good start to a sketchbook dude, im liking the stilllifes, tho i think you could try being a bit more expressive in your stokes at this stage, they seem somewhat labored? Keep sharing ;-)
chuck18mp
July 25th, 2008, 04:00 PM
I like the crabs story(kinda funny):)
eminkey2003
November 14th, 2008, 11:02 PM
You have some very elegant lines and faces. This one (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=437857&d=1218759909) is especially pretty. I say you could try to go almost 100% soft though, instead of having sharp, dark lines in some areas (like the the nose, mouth and eyes here-- those could be just as gentle as the neck and shoulders), even if those do provide a nice contrast.
Crit: in some drawings, the scribbled lines seem like a lack of confidence (in others, like the drawing I pointed out, they look loose and graceful). This one (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=437872) especially. You don't need to draw a hundred lines, just get to the point.
Aeromax
November 22nd, 2008, 07:38 PM
Composition is awesome, shading too.
Limely
March 14th, 2009, 07:52 PM
<3 The blanket creatures, aww. Love the way you ink.
The last drawing is great. Very emotive and frightening. The expressions and the way you shaded it really emphasizes that.
Would love to see more. c:
pencil1
April 16th, 2009, 06:34 PM
Its all looking great :). Maybe try using less lines on your quick figures though ;).
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