rebel character concept

[nayades]

just a rebel sketch for a game. any c&c is very welcomed. more to come soon :D
http://digitalismo.net/pruebas/images/conceptcivilian.jpg

[Dosadi]

He's got some proportion issues. His left forearm (the one with the gun) is too long. It should be the same length as his upper arm. His calves are too skinny and the left one looks like a flat plane. His feet are to small even with foreshortening taken into consideration. The foot should be as long as the forearm from the middle of the elbow to the wrist (then adjust for foreshortening). The right hand is also indistinct. Correct these issues and you should have the beginnings of a cool character!
Keep up the good Work!

[pvrhye]

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