Postapocalyptic Pair

[Fipse]

Hi everybody,
after posting quite often it´s time that you can see, what I´m producing in my sparetime ;)

http://www.kriegsherren-von-og.de/webpics/endzeitpaar01.jpg

This is influenced by my favourite Computergames of the Fallout-series. I first just wanted to try out the tutorial on Adi Grabov´s site http://www.sofos.com/adi/ but it turned out technically for me quite interesting. In fact this is the first picture thatt I would say is Computergraphic produced by me - the other stuff I´ve done ist more comic-style coloured crowquill-work.

Due to it´s nature as a sketch I see that there are some flaws: the handas are quite small, her left thigh is too long and the hips are a little bit on the broad side ;) but for a first-timer I´m quite content.

Comments and critiques very welcome!

[Fipse]

130 views and no comment is a kind of comment, too ;)

What is it? Is it too mediocre that noone can say anythhing good or bad about it or is it so bad, everyone ist too polite to tell? I really could need some constructive critics.

Tell it to me, I can take it ;)

[Oblio]

you have to work you proportions and anathomy - look at girl's hands -one ir thin, other is not, it's a "fake feeling" in all you pic. Also perspective is a bit off, your colors are.. too saturated and the mood is too kid-like - maybe is because of the dark outline.
Sorry if i was too hard on you - i'm also just a nobody but i guess any feedback is good. If you plan to practice you life drawings please check the areas - there are some crazy guys doing amazing stuff on this forum willing to help.

Oblio

[Fipse]

Thanks Oblio,

it´s always good having someone else critzising the stuff. The pic turned out to be a longer work than I intended and I lost my eye on it (don´t know how to express it in english ;) ). I´m coming more from the graphic works with pencil and crowquill and worked mainly "comicstyle" so I think I maybe overemphazise lines. On the other hand I don´t want to copy styles and work ... time to think over my styles :smirk:

[Fipse]

Mpf, just looked at the picture with the Photoshop at work ... Now I understand what you mean with the saturation ... on my Barco-Monitor the pic looks quite bonbon-like.

I suppose I have to recalibrate my home-monitor :mad:

Fipse

P.S. Everyone should own a Barco ....