Cyber goddess

[rodrigo!]

hey guys, I hope you like this pic..
I wish I could post here more often, the artwork around here rocks, but I hope I can get some advice or anything to help me improve.

here's the pic-

http://www.renderosity.com/photos/ArtistArticle5671.jpg

[poisonspider]

Hey, this is wicked man....and your only 16? wow!
hey, i want to ask you something so message me on aim(poisonspider35) or msn(spencer@travel-net.com)

[Khaifin]

arms are kinda short am i rite?

[Jane Radstrom]

Actually I think the forarm and upper arm are out of proportion, the elbows should be moved so that the upper arm isn't so long. Then I think it will look better. Also, the legs are short, and very thin. The calves and knees should be thicker or at least as thick as the arms. :) The nipples are extreemly small and I don't think they should be placed right in the middle of the breast like that, even though it is cartoon style. See if you can find some photos of real (not implants) breasts to look at the nipple size and placement. Other than that it's pretty cool! Lots going on in the background, I like the rendering of the visable knee, too.

[creatix]

It looks great!

Use some varying line weights or more shading to help seperate some of the shapes.

I can get lost in the image just a bit without enough contrast.

Of course color can do the same thing for you if you bring it to that stage.

Those are my only crits, otherwise its a nice piece of work.

[Howdy]

I disagree about the lower leg. The pose the woman is in indicates that she is crippled. The withered leg matches the crippledness implied by her pose.

Perceptive.

[NOOSE]

HEy cool I like the concept...and its nice to see ahem...decently drawn, breasts, a colored vertion would be steller, and is she being repaired? or turned into a cyborg?

[rodrigo!]

thanks for all the advice and help with the anatomy guys, and it's getting inked so a coloured version might be possible,

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