Sculpture drawing (updated with michelangelo)

[Ryu]

Hi,
this is a drawing from a sculpture in the louvre, paris.
I'm sorry about the pic's quality,
but try to scan a A2 size with a A4 scan ;)
Every comments welcome !
Cya,
:chug:
http://membres.lycos.fr/riou00/Dessin/Dump/pajou.jpg

[Rockhead]

It looks like a good start. The main problem I see is that your line quality and weight is the same throughout the entire drawing. I would work on using a variety of line thicknesses and sharper overall contrast. Put the most detail in the area where you want the viewer to focus.

[Phuzion]

yeah, what Rockhead said, but also focus more on the structure of the drawing before you go in with the details. Good start though ;p keep at it.

[Ryu]

Another drawing from the louvre, the michelangelo's slave :)
Really a niiiice sculpture, i love it :)
Sorry again for the bad img, it's a photo... (if anyone has tips to improve the quality, condition of lightning... )
I tried to be careful about the things you said, so i hope it will see on this one :)
-size of paper : A3
-One pencil, mechanic, HB, 0.9mm
-1h45
:chug: Leave me a Comment :D
http://membres.lycos.fr/riou00/Dessin/Dump/buanorotti_slave.jpg

[spok]

too much random muscles...