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insomniac
October 25th, 2003, 03:57 AM
hi there. its been some time since i last posted anything here(could any of the administrators delete the profile 'goo' cos i cancelled the email address of the nick).

some of the things i'm working on during the weekends when i'm out of the army.... seems i'm getting burned out too fast on the pieces. i could really use some help on them, thanks.

btw, sorry if the images are too big.

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dumpsite0/images/inspire.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dumpsite0/images/satan.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dumpsite0/images/siren.jpg

nikia
October 27th, 2003, 08:54 PM
I like the minataur and the girl, not sure what the top one is. Possibly the minataur's head could be a bit larger. And I think you have to work on his face more, defining his mouth, teeth, chin, etc. Some shading and highlighting would help a lot on the head area. I really like the muscles and the hand on this one.
As for the girl (mermaid?) I think she just needs more work, some shading and highlighting, especially in the hair and water. Possibly some green, greys, and whites in the water. Also, a face might help? I think you do good work, you just have to take it further. Hope this helps?

Christopher
October 30th, 2003, 11:28 PM
keep working on the bottom 2 images, they look great so far :)