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poly_cube
October 25th, 2003, 03:19 AM
This was done for another website daily sketchgroup - and it was pretty fun. I kinda wanted to add more elements to it but I thought it might get to busy.
http://www.caffeineartist.com/drawings/anarchist_walking.jpg

zeroe
October 25th, 2003, 03:54 AM
good composition
i think the colors work very well together. But i do think that it looks very unfinished. Maybe you should go back to it cause it has a lo more potential waiting for you to get it out. I think and not so perfect inking would also add to the feel of the picture, as in smudge some of it, add splashes etc.

good work so far

winjer
October 25th, 2003, 09:10 AM
Why would anarchists want a leader? He looks like a tetsuo/dracula hybrid.

It looks good except for how you ditched the strong shadows when you went to do the pants . It feels like 2 different pics.

poly_cube
October 25th, 2003, 03:58 PM
Why would anarchists want a leader?

ever notice they buy all their anarchist merchandise? who knows haha

i'll take another stab at it0 I just don't want to add so much detail and have it killed so prob a mix of detailed objects in the foreground and in the background something really less.

I took out the shadows in the pants mainly because I wanted the viewers eyes to look at the A first then move up to the body. But messy line work would have been cooler.

Thanks for the crits guys!

Deadsprite
October 25th, 2003, 06:40 PM
hope you don't mind buddy. but i think this is what he was talking about.
http://photobucket.com/albums/0603/deadsprite/eeee5929.jpg
this was really really quick in photoshop with a mouse. but you can keep thin shadows, but still extreme. he was refering to the upper torso being really black and bold ink, but the legs still looked like a pensil drawing. this is just for reference.