Space lancer repairing.

[Valerij V.]

Hallo falks. This is latest work of mine. I posted it earlier in critique center, then i changed it a bit after some advise and now i want to share it with others. Thanks.

[ibbo]

I think that this has alot going for it, but theres a few elements holding it back. First, i dont think i would ever recommend mixing all three of the primary colours in one piece. Two work well, red and blue offering the best contrast, but the third addition of yellow waters down the piece, and makes the red seem over-powering.

However, the perspective seems spot on, and other than that i would only suggest looking at light values for your next piece (i.e. dont be afraid to mix some darker and lighter tones in there).

Good job overall, try and push your next piece further and pay closer attention to detail!

-Ibbo

[Valerij V.]

Well thanks for valuable advice. I only noticed that my lights has different sizes after i finished my work. Yeah, there is much to work on and thanks once again for closer look and your assistance.

About color mixing thanks again, next time i will know that.