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berychon
June 30th, 2008, 12:47 PM
Hello,

Here you can see some of my digital stuff create from the last weeks...

Comments and critics are welcome!

Wasker
June 30th, 2008, 05:14 PM
hey Berychon, I like the character. Looks really slick and pro, good render and values. No crits to give here :)

However, the environments are abit broken, in my opinion. The perspective is abit off in the first enviro, lay down some guides and you'll fix it in no time. The colour temperature in both enviroments needs revising to avoid the muddy look. Establish a palette in the thumbnail stage before you put the colours down in the final painting.

Also, check the light sources in the 2nd enviro. Where does the light come from? The sun seems to be in the right corner in the painting and yet the houses in the middle ground are lit from the side.