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moops
October 23rd, 2003, 07:13 PM
Hey all, this is the first time I've posted in this section but I've been doing the dsg's for a few months now. For some reason it never occured to me to post here. Anyway i'm relatively new to this whole painting thing so i'd love some C and C.
http://www.angelfire.com/comics/naart/painting/monkey4_small.jpg
http://www.angelfire.com/comics/naart/concept/painted_patrol.jpg
http://www.angelfire.com/comics/naart/concept/call.jpg
bwkeough
October 23rd, 2003, 07:25 PM
I like them alot! colors and attitude in the first one would work great in a children's book. I think the monster looks a little floaty, I think some deeper darks where his feet are pressed to the wall would help. unless he's pouncing, in which case he needs motion blur cause he's still floaty. :)
the colors in the G.I.'s face are nice and the animated officer calling in a firestrike in the 3rd image is wonderfully animated. The background is too calm, tho, do you plan lots of tracerfire and ominous shadows in a color version?
davi
October 23rd, 2003, 07:36 PM
big fan of the nam images.
chukw
October 23rd, 2003, 11:17 PM
Pretty cool- come on in! :)
moops
October 25th, 2003, 11:20 AM
Thanks for the comments guys:)
bwkeough: I see what you're saying about the monster, he IS kinda floaty. I wasn't going to paint the second NAM image but now I might, complete with tracer fire and dark ominous shadows!
darkcult
October 25th, 2003, 07:20 PM
I'l be original:
1.Welcome
2.Nice job.
3.Love the first one.
4.Post more.
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