View Full Version : Another Painted Characterdesign!
rhemrev
October 23rd, 2003, 01:54 PM
hey there, since I got alot of good response on my previous characterdesign, I thought I'd do another.....:)
http://www.rhemrev.com/femalesamurai.jpg
http://www.rhemrev.com/femalesamuraicolor.jpg
Big version: http://www.rhemrev.com/femalesamuraicolor-big.jpg[/img]
Looking forward to your c&c once again,
-Edwin
Atomicfate
October 23rd, 2003, 02:51 PM
looks good.
i think the angle of the right foot does not agree with the rest of the right leg. seems the knee is pointed one direction, but the foot kind of pigeon toes.
i like her quasi tatoos. like they're done in henna or something.
|SaRcAsM|
October 23rd, 2003, 03:07 PM
I´ve seen ur other character and i love this one too. But aside from both being really good concepts they also share the same faults. The anatomy isnt consistent throughout the pic. allow me to explain: both legs have diferent shadowing. if their both receiving the same light source (frontal) the right leg should be lighter.her left hand isnt holding the sword correctly, if u look close u might see that the hand doesnt follow the prespective of the handguard.
On the good side, i just LOVE those tatoos what do u use to do those? they almost look like being painted over glass. stunning. And i do not agree with the foot being off. maybe u should make some wrinkles on the boot to make it look more of i think u were trying to transmit.
Good Allround Job!:thumbsup:
Cheers! :chug:
Sarc
Rockhead
October 23rd, 2003, 06:30 PM
I like the nice straight forward line work on your sketch, on the color piece I think the background design is a little too strong and bold, it distracts from the figure. I'ld maybe go a little easier on the bling-bling highlights too, but I love the original sketch.
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