Last weeks weapons and characters...

[Saga Brush]

Some weapon and character designs I did last week, critiques are appreciated.


Trying various models
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/arsenal.jpg

Going with the handgun, adding some expansions for it.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/BlackOutSupport.jpg

Detailing the weapon
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/BlackOutdetails.jpg

random gasmask soldier
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/soldier01.jpg

imaginary racing game character
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/stella.jpg

imaginary racing game character 2
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/Mav.jpg

Marines
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/nextWar.jpg

A spartan
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/Spartan.jpg

Spartan steps
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/spartanWIP.jpg

Character designs from one of my graphic novels I hope to create someday
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/noireUC.jpg

Image I made for Hideo Kojima when he was in town last week.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/welshe/MGS4Tribute.jpg

[ston52]

:mittenbop:

[simoncheng]

you got very nice concept work here.

[Kman.]

:mittenbop:

Most worthless comment ever.


On the work: I'm digging the weapon designs, however I feel that some of your peices could be pushed to another level of finish. I feel that there are also some anatomy issues with some of your characters, and that they are somewhat lacking in form.

Again, the weapon designs are hot! But keep working on pushing the form and detail, and set the bar higher on the level of finish that you want to achieve.

[JFierce]

Weapons look great
On the first image though the black background makes it kind of hard to see some of the guns

The characters as stated above do have some some anatomy problems


I like the handgun :)

[silvestri99]

I love the feel and look of these designs but (I'm not sure if it's my monitor) I can't pull out much detail or what is going on within the form. Sometimes it seems to be the black background that it is fading into and sometimes it is just the elements of form within each piece. Great work so far!

[Saga Brush]

I see what you guys mean, thanks for the replies, gonna keep working...

[Lotet]

you have some real tallent, and some real serious problems with anathomy and posture, do studies, a lot of em.

[Shpow.Iain]

I love this style! It's is very... MMMM.

Seriously though, it's neat and great, the only thing I'd think needs a revamp is the grenade launcher. You see, putting it over there totally abolished the use of the barrel (between the projectile and the trigger.) Try making it break down at the front of the trigger. Alternatively you could have a port on the side open and then slip a grenade in. Or you could even give it a revolving chamber chamber. like the MGL-8.

[Duman]

You have a very cool style. Very unique and powerful. I would, on the weapons, use a lighter background. Its a super heavy black you used and its overpowering. Other than that I really like the weapon designs, and the Spartan.