drawings and other stuff

[Gali0]

hi everyone! Here I post some compositions, I`ve made. I analyse the forms and the contrast between them. There are my first compositions. Please c&c


http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/6134/sdsc01081pi3.jpg
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/4476/sdsc01084bk7.jpg
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/2707/sdsc01087zr9.jpg

[Gali0]

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/6796/sdsc01085ae5.jpg
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/5250/sdsc01091bm9.jpg
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4163/sdsc01095op4.jpg

[Art_Addict]

In order to convincingly recreate the effects of the light, it is useful to thoroughly study less complicated set-ups.

I think the complex arrangements are a bit distracting and my eye doesn't have a chance to rest. And because you're treating all objects separately in terms of value you're not guiding the viewer and creating a sense of space. These more abstract compositions that you show in some of them would really benefit from a well established value structure. I would advise you to draw a simple still life setup, preferably a round organic object for example to study the effects of the light.

Tom