Painting

[Kay Coenen]

http://www.warande.uu.nl/~kay/tb_schilderij.jpg

I made this painting on canvas with a a spraycan and oil painting, yes; old scool!

:: Kay's World :: (http://www.warande.uu.nl/~kay/)

[Rusty Red Robot]

Nice start; you should finish it! The outline for the city on the floating island is really conspicous!

[SinisteR]

The wave on the left seem a bit pointy, and the horizon isn`t quite flat, while the ocean almost always is, even in heavy storms.

And that sky, something could really be done about that. I get the feeling that if you go out into the sea you`ll fall off the edge, which come to think of it might be what you`re aiming for. And if you`re not going for that edge-of-the-world thing, the ocean is a bit too clear all the way in the back, giving the whole thing a bit of a lack of perspective.

Overall, nice concept, and sorry about those long comments, it`s one of those nights you`ve got nothing better to do.

[Kay Coenen]

Originally posted by SinisteR
The wave on the left seem a bit pointy, and the horizon isn`t quite flat, while the ocean almost always is, even in heavy storms.

And that sky, something could really be done about that. I get the feeling that if you go out into the sea you`ll fall off the edge, which come to think of it might be what you`re aiming for. And if you`re not going for that edge-of-the-world thing, the ocean is a bit too clear all the way in the back, giving the whole thing a bit of a lack of perspective.

Overall, nice concept, and sorry about those long comments, it`s one of those nights you`ve got nothing better to do.

Thanx for your comment, and yes, you are right! I have to finish it!

[Kay Coenen]

Originally posted by Charming Louse
Nice start; you should finish it! The outline for the city on the floating island is really conspicous!

I will finish the city one day. I think I want to make the city of white marble and golden rooftops! Thanx for your repley!