My thunderdome wip... (updated)

[Payback]

I could really use some crits on this one and I will appreciate any comments. :) Thaanks

http://www.home.no/perequin/spartancolor.jpg

[zeroe]

i think the main problem here isnt the actually drawing, but more the rendering. The colors look hastily applied and dont give sense of depth. I think a more subtle color choice would do you good aswell, becazse like this the colors are too different to work together IMO. you might also want to go over the lines again, because they look a bit wonky in places, a smooth crisp lineart can work really nicely ;)

good concept tho, keep working

[Payback]

Thanks alot for the crit. I'll see what I can come up with.
Here's an update.
PS: That so called reflection is just a test, but I always forget to take it out. :)

http://www.home.no/perequin/SpartanColor2.jpg