View Full Version : Lone Desert Recon
IgnusDei
October 17th, 2003, 08:41 PM
http://www3.telus.net/ignusdei/images/lone-recon%20version%202.jpg
this is an OLD pic of mine that i tweaked and tweaked on photoshop...it actually needs more work, but hey.
chukw
October 17th, 2003, 09:25 PM
That's nice!
infinitipo
October 17th, 2003, 09:45 PM
wow, exactly what chukw said! Maybe you make some of the background a bit sharper (the desert mountains), as well as the brown section at the front of the ship. Also, I think the dust at the back should be a bit thicker, too.
ChaosEidolon
October 18th, 2003, 01:26 AM
great piece, rendering and everything...but you have a pretty major balance problem going on there.
The left side is way too busy to be properly balanced. It takes the focus off of your subjuct, that cool recon craft you got going there.
I like what youre doing with the lights on the planet's surface but the contrast is detracting too so i think the piece would be best served by seperating these two most aparent elements to opposite sides of the composition in order to balance each other out.
Other than that i think its great though, great concepts, great potential. ;)
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