First Post-A Few Sketches (nudity)

[Anapathetic]

This is my first post and here are just a few small
sketches...any suggestions welcome...thanks <p>http://www.thatse.com/images/evan/sketches.jpg

[soul8o8]

can't really think of anything to say.. they're not bad but then they're not very good either.. i have no idea but i'd say that you should try to loosen up ur sketching! i think you're holding on too tight.. try to make some drawings from references but turn the references up side down and focus on the form and proportion and not what they represent..

here's a technique for practicing to loosen up that i like very much: take a clean paper and hold a pen against it. now look on something in your surrounding - could be your own hand (the free one) or whatever. now follow the outline of this object very closely and slowly with your eyes. as you follow the outline you draw what you think you see with the pen on the paper. but you must NOT look on the paper! not once! if you think you make a mistake then just carry on but do not look on the paper! this feels very awkward at first, but it is great believe me..

[die_with_honor]

on the full body picture of the naked chick the stomics off
breasts are all right the backs not curved enuff the hands could be alittle bigger face of the top one needs a lot of work