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Code-man
May 23rd, 2008, 12:33 AM
being revised - Thanks for the input. I will repost when updated. Cheer!

Code-man
May 23rd, 2008, 12:35 AM
being revised

Elwell
May 23rd, 2008, 12:38 AM
Everything is very slick, but nothing fits together. The space and the lighting are unconvincing.

Code-man
May 23rd, 2008, 12:49 AM
Hey all take slick, thanks!

Frogisis
May 23rd, 2008, 12:55 AM
I'd agree. Everything looks great, but then main area that stands out as unnatural is the back of the tunnel: There's no shadow or anything showing how the mouth of the tunnel is attached to the rock face, so the tunnel itself doesn't really look like it's going back into the rock. If you had more dynamic and darker shading just around the mouth and a little bit on the inside, you'll probably be able to avoid that Wile E. Coyote "painted-on tunnel" look.