View Full Version : Drawing!!
metaphysiks
October 13th, 2003, 06:03 PM
just a drawing this time, i would love crits as far as rendering goes
metahttp://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/1/26176/p/523081_6334775273461544345_vl.jpg
sin
October 13th, 2003, 06:21 PM
let me be the first to say
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ABOUT FUCKIN TIME! geez, homie :D
jus' playing. that looks really really tight, i think the rendering and anatomy are spot on, just...ya know...finish it! i really cant think of anything that needs to be critiqued, it really really does look great.
**edit: upon looking back, the legs look funny, im not quite sure what it is, they might be too big, the pose might be bad for the pic, im not sure. they might just be too long. hope i helped
ClocktowerArtworks
October 13th, 2003, 06:24 PM
looks great...really nice rendering...but...his right hand seems to be bent at a really painful angle...just not sure that it's possible to make your wrist bend like that.
poisonspider
October 13th, 2003, 08:07 PM
ANIRAM! SIGN on AIM...do you remember me?
poisonspider
October 13th, 2003, 08:09 PM
Nice armor
metaphysiks
October 13th, 2003, 09:13 PM
thanks for the comments guys
sin: yeah the legs were just thrown on, i could probably fix and finish but hell you know me its just probably not gonna happen
clock: yeah it looks awkward. ha. maybe i pushed too far?
poison: sorry man that AIM aint workin, im just too busy
meta
metalwinds
October 14th, 2003, 12:01 PM
your rendering is definitely better, though the anatomy is still slightly off. some of the values are too dark based on your light source, but youre improving. .. keep studying light and anatomy and you will get it. the metal looks pretty good, though it could be taken further.. . it was much improved since i saw it first. keep em comin
peace
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