Vampirella

[Rictus Grin]

http://www.darksharp.com/files/Concept/Big/characters/concept_vampirella.jpg

About 2.5 hours. Drawn traditionally with a blue pencil then inked with a marker and ballpoint pen. Colored in Photoshop.

C&C welcomed as always.

[Rictus Grin]

yay 183 views and not one C&C. :confused:

[ClocktowerArtworks]

work on varying your line weights to give the piece depth and believability...think about where her weight is balanced too...and keep working on anatomy...can't say much about color because it's not my strong point...you have a good start...do some more...and don't whine if no one comments...there are alot of pieces on this board.

[zeroe]

a few crits:
firstly, i think ur color choices clash horribly. i think the orange is way to contrasting with the purple and overall dark feeling of the pic. I think a dark blood red would do you much better, or even a black or blue shade.

secondly: the quality of the pic is terrible, making the image less pleasant to look at. but thats just minor.

thirdly: your shading seems confused at times. some of the shadows appear to be random and out of place, especially in the torso area. try to find one light source and work from that.

apart from that pretty good job
keep it up

[Rictus Grin]

Thanks for the crits. That's all I wanted, since that the whole purpose of this forum is to improve.

ClockworkArtworks: Not sure why it's termed "whining" whenever one has a valid complaint. I think you are using that term way "whining" to liberally, . Whining to me, is usually based on a voice tonality. Additionally, if I hadn't said anything, it looked like no one would have commented.

That being said...
The orange color on my monitor is a bright red. My monitor is color calibrated btw. However, I'll take out some of the yellow and add a bit more blue. Easy enough.
Varying the line weights, looked to me like I was doing that, check the inner thigh. but I could make the line weights more aggressive.
Lighting - check.

I'll give it another pass.

Anybody want to add some crits, please do.

[Howdy]

I kinda like it. Except it look like a male impersonator in the face.