My very own metropolis

[Theo]

http://194.236.60.128/theo/massive6.jpg

Never really hit that dense syd mead look, but oh well. Time to be original I guess:) Hit me with some crits please.
Only reason I find it finished is since im bored of it. It looks far from completed in my eyes... but .. Oh well.

gimme your thoughts.

:drool: .. Gettin sleepy too.

- theo

[DRESDEN]

Pretty cool piece. The lighting is good and so is the perspective. It's a great sketchy piece, you could do moe work on it. It's halfway finished & half way sketch.

nice work though.:chug:

[jilted_one]

i like the sense of perpective you achieved, very nice, also what really catches the eye in which the perspective can be bent from either top or bottom view. Cool job man.

[Theo]

Thanks for the compliments you too:)

I Agree on the fact that it could use some more work, but as I said.. I cant stand it. Ive had enough. Time for something new and fresh to work on. some.. skyskrapers perhaps? :)

:chug: cheers to you, you encourage me to keep working.

-T

[Tully]

Looks great, Theo. The perspective is really quite strong. My biggest crit is that I wish there was either something that pulled my eye and was really interesting. Right now the viewer's gaze is directed towards the middle, and there's nothing there to speak of... nothing to really make me say "wow, that's nifty!" Maybe add some more detail, and colourful neon signs around the side? Maybe even a figure on some sort of hover-vehicle. Just something neat to look at.

But like I said... great work!

[Theo]

Hey Tully, and thanks for the input:)

I agree. bigtime. Something in the middle to catch the eye.. a falling person perhaps? makes sense.. One day perhaps.. for now... im happy:)

-T

[grinn]

The alignment of the hotel sign, or the perspective rather seems strange to me.

I think adding in a guy falling would be great. Would put in some good motion. Maybe some kind of craft moving between the buildings would also work well.

If those are to be walkways between the buildings it might also be cool to have people on them.

Nice work.