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sam mooney
October 12th, 2003, 02:30 PM
I'm new here, but very impressed with the talent.
Critiques are more than welcome.
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/autobio/01.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/autobio/02.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/autobio/03.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/autobio/04.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/autobio/05.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/autobio/06.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/autobio/07.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/autobio/08.jpg

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Sinix
October 12th, 2003, 02:43 PM
Nice! :D My only complaint with that whole thing is the way you kinda merged all kinds of pics together in big panels on the first two pages.
JoshuaTheJames
October 12th, 2003, 04:56 PM
that was fun...
endregan
October 12th, 2003, 05:04 PM
haha good humour
DRESDEN
October 12th, 2003, 05:18 PM
It's awesome how you used real photographs as a comic cook.
I really enjoyed it. Cool!!
:D
bRyaN
October 12th, 2003, 06:20 PM
Sam from BP and the Joe Kubert school...sup bro..
this stuff is very very solid...
sam mooney
October 12th, 2003, 06:57 PM
Thanks for the kind words everybody.

Sinix: Yeah, I was worried about that, I'm trying to establish a sence of place, and make it more interesting than just a bunch of panels. I think it worked ok, but I have reservations (I'm still to close to it to judge it objectively though).

bRyaN: BP represent! :chug:

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bRyaN
October 12th, 2003, 07:02 PM
Hell yea man, i was wondering when you guys were gonna come through over here...

BP in the hizzy..:chug:
Chewbacca
October 13th, 2003, 08:38 PM
my favorite flavor has to be spicy beef