Last Gas

[MSK]

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im opened to any crit, as i'm new to this, thanks.

[big_b_utah]

nice, I like how the lighting changed, very cool.

[Valerian]

Nice work overall, but there's a thing that bothers me about the one with the sunset: The shadows. Their direction has nothing to do with the location of the setting sun. I believe the shadows were included in your initial sketch, unlike the sun?

[RaWIII]

I agree with valerian,

compositionally I think the last one is most interesting. in the first there seems to be an awkward evenness to the distribution of shapes and values. also the grouping of values in the last seems most interesting.

[fughi from yuggoth]

it seems ,like u made the upper one first and developed the other ones the base of the first.that's y i think, the light in the first one suck and in the other ones kix ass,y'know?

draw sum lines from sun to the house's fringe to get proper shadow borders.