new stuff

[corny47]

so here's some of the new stuff. i just got tired of editing the other thread so threw it all on here.

[Rares Halmagean]

Good composition in 1,3 and 6. Add more contrast and atmosphere in some of these. Check your anatomy. 3 is your strongest piece.

[humboldt squid]

Yeah, pay attention to composition and anatomy. Also, you're shading way too much with black and it's flattening out your images something awful.

[Mengel]

try focusing on shading; remember that all shading and light is JUST light and the absence of light, there is no segregated 'shaded' region but everything is related; do some lights and shading studies just when you have the time to and meditate on how light is universally relative to all shades and highlights.

good work, keep posting more!

[SMVidaurri]

you're definitely getting better. Though the first image looks like the guy has no hands. Keep up the improvement though.

[RaWIII]

a few things.

your images seem to suffer from a limited range of tones and saturation. I think you would benefit from some monochrome studies, using temperature shifts to create interest. Grouping values will allow you to see how your composition works and create a visual hierarchy. Perhaps simplifying your forms and shapes will create a more diverse and dynamic piece. A good way to avoid convoluted shapes is to study contours and silhouettes.

I do see some interesting ideas and improvement, keep it up!

[jalingon3011]

I think your medieval or fantasy character designs are most impressive. Somehow there's a unique taste to it that draws a big tick in the viewers' heads. The best one I think is the first image, which I can see improvements from others. The 7th image, the head seems in the wrong place and angle of the character.

Look forward to see more of your works.