Fiona's Illustrations

[fionameng]

marks on paper

[fionameng]

markers on paper

[Aly Fell]

I think the top 5 or so are smashing. You seem to have more confidence with your line and drawing when not rendering up, and it works better for it being simple. The 'fashion' drawings, poses and expression work well and the line art is very sensitive. With the tiger (as the horse), you really need better reference if you used any; it's not as strong, but to appreciate it, it really should be a smaller image. Too big! :)

[alicat08]

I think the top 5 or so are smashing. You seem to have more confidence with your line and drawing when not rendering up, and it works better for it being simple. The 'fashion' drawings, poses and expression work well and the line art is very sensitive. With the tiger (as the horse), you really need better reference if you used any; it's not as strong, but to appreciate it, it really should be a smaller image. Too big! :)

I completely agree!! the top 5 are my favorites

[chuck18mp]

the tiger should have the eyes a little bit espaced :) cool stuff!

[jalingon3011]

I think you have the potential to be a fashion designer, there's a slick sense in your styling and clothing that makes a really good tick, perfect for shoujo (girl's) manga but still would make people want to really wear them and walk on the street. (While the character look adorable and has a feel of personality)

I think, however, it seems you have difficulties when applying those with sceneries. You have a good idea of what the scenes should look like, and the structure seems work out really well, but the execution somehow lacks a sense of maturity and completion... I think it might be necessary to work on background and lighting if it is to be improved. Just my 2 cents.

Really look forward for your future works.